Saturday, July 11, 2015

At The Beginning

“Once upon a time,” “It was the best of times, it was the worst of times,” “You better not never tell nobody but God,” and “In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit,” are beginnings to some famous books.  Have you ever considered just how important the beginning of a book is?  I haven’t until I attended a book club. 
We recently finished the book, Behind the Beautiful Forevers, by Katherine Boo, a memoir of life in a slum of Mumbai, India.  It wasn’t one of my favorite books, and when another woman at Book Club asked me why I said, “I feel that if it wasn’t for the prologue people wouldn’t read the book.  The prologue is what would keep people interested because by the time we finally find out what happened the night the prologue took place we are already care enough about the characters to find out what happens to all of them.”
The lady smiled and said, “Good thing the prologue is there then.” 
That shut me up.  I realized then that the prologue was the most important part of this book.  If it weren’t there I would not have finished the book.  This fact made me start thinking about how important beginnings are.  I’ve talked with many people who put books down and never pick them up again.  One of the main reasons is because the first several chapters didn’t capture their attention.  The author may have put his attention getters later in the book, but for some people that’s too late and the book goes to Goodwill collecting dust. 
The slum of Annawadi

 Beginnings set the scene and tone of a book.  In Behind the Beautiful Forevers, Boo not only describes the night The One Leg burnt herself, but also gives a description of Annawadi, the slum in which the book takes place.  Boo, a writer for The New York Times, doesn’t describe the slum in the same way a typical book writer would—she does it in a way that makes the story and the description flow together like soap and water.  Right away I knew that this wasn’t a book about a woman who burnt herself, but about the unthinkable lives real people lived at the same time I was discovering the fun of college and challenges of being on my own.  The descriptions that took place in the Prologue made me realize this book was more real than any other non-fiction book I had read.
From the description of people passing by the burnt body of The One Leg I knew Behind the Beautiful Forevers was not going to be a lets-skip-through-daisies book.  I knew this book was going to be about life as it really was for the people living in the slums of Mumbai.  This book was raw.  Boo would not hold anything back as she described flies sitting in the eyes of babies, the stench of the public toilets, and hunger that resulted in boys becoming thieves to feed themselves. 

Boo’s move to start her book in the middle of the story was wise.  She captured the reader’s attention and told readers that the book they had just picked up wasn’t going to cut corners in telling the honest truth of living in Annawadi.  If you are looking for beautifully written memoir, I would stop by your local library and pick up Behind the Beautiful Forevers.  It’s a book you won’t soon forget.

For some extra fun on beginnings, Studio C has a great skit on the impact beginning of books can have on the reader.

Monday, November 24, 2014

The Effect of Reading the Word

“This is my domain,” my twelve year old brother told me a month ago.
“Your domain?” I asked.
“Yeah, my domain.  Do you know what that word means?”
“Yes.  Do you?”
“Yes.  What do you think it means?”
“It means the place in which you rule.”
“Yep,” he replied.  “Ever since I’ve started reading Fablehaven my vocabulary has increased.”  Then he added these wise words, “Reading increases your vocabulary.”
I thought about the incredible value of reading, and how children today are missing out on it.  How many kids today read for fun?  Or do they allot all of their time to playing video games and watching television?  What are the consequences of casting away books and picking up the remote?
In a study done in 1999 and repeated in 2004 “It was found that 39% of youth played video games on a typical day in 1999, and 41% did so in 2004. . . . [G]amers spent an average of 26 minutes per day playing in 1999 and 32 minutes per day playing in 2004” (Cummings, Vanderwater). Lets say that the numbers increase the same amount every five years.  This means in 2014 43% of young people will play video games, and they will play for an average of 44 minutes per day.  This is just an average, which means there are some who play hardly at all, and others who play significantly more than 44 minutes. 
This study concluded that there was a concern that gamers were neglecting schoolwork.  A rising problem in today’s society is the amount of media consumed and homework neglected. Doctors don’t become doctors by playing video games.   Lawyers don’t become lawyers by watching TV.  An experienced forest guide doesn’t successfully survive by looking at everyone’s latest post on Facebook, or tweets on Twitter.  They become successful by reading.  Not just reading the TV guide, or instructions for a video game console, but actual literature and intellectual books. 
In a recent talk, Tad R. Callister, a leader in The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, recounted the story of a young man, Ben Carson, who said, “‘I was the worst student in my whole fifth grade class.’”  In a math test consisting of 30 problems, he got zero of them correct.  Ben’s mother, Sonya, “had only a third-grade education, and could not read.”  She was raising her two sons in the Detroit ghettos.  Callister continues the story by explaining that Sonya cleaned the houses of successful people for a living, and one day she realized that each house had one thing in common—they each had a library.  The people who lived in these houses read.  So she went home, turned off the television and told her boys they were watching too much TV.  She limited their TV time to three programs a week and told them that with the rest of their free time they would go to the library and read two books a week and give a report to her about them. 
Outside of school, Ben had never read a book in his life.  Nevertheless, their mother made her sons read.  Change happened.  When Ben was in seventh grade he was at the top of his class.  He eventually attended Yale University, “then John Hopkins medical school, where at age 33 he became its chief pediatric neurosurgeon and a world-renowned surgeon” (Callister). 
The success of Ben Carson wasn’t due to his teachers, or a sudden change in the course material, it was due to the fact that he read books.  It doesn’t matter what kind of books he read; the main fact was that he read. 
Today, too few parents are persistent enough to make their children turn off the TV and pick up a book, and very few kids will read books for fun.  I asked my seventeen-year-old brother, a senior in high school with a 4.0 GPA, why he thought kids would rather watch TV than read a book.  “Because they’re lazy,” he said.  “They would rather sit in front of a TV and have a story told to them.  Reading is work.”  If you’re reading a story then you have to imagine it.  You also have to remember it.  Unlike a movie or television show that tells a story in 30 minutes to 2 hours, a book can take days to read.  If you’re reading an informative book, you have to be able to comprehend what you’re reading in order to enjoy or feel like you’re accomplishing something. 
With the downturn in the amount of time kids spend in reading; I believe there is a significant lack of vocabulary among the rising generation.  “Book reading in the home has been shown to make distinct contributions to young children’s literacy development” (Dickenson, Smith, 105).  Whether it’s reading Fablehaven, the newspaper, or a book on trains, children today need to turn off the TV, the video games, the iPods, the tablets, and read.  They will do better in school and in life.  


Callister, Tad R. “Parents: The Prime Gospel Teachers of Their Children.” LDS.com. The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (2014).  Web. 9 October, 2014.

Cummings, Hope M. Vandewater, Elizabeth A. “Relation of Adolescent Video Game Play to Time Spent in Other Activities”, JAMA Pediatrics, 161.7 (2007): 684-689. Web. 6 October 2014.

Dickenson, David K. Smith, Miriam W.  “Long-term effects of preschool teachers’ book readings on low-income children’s vocabulary and story comprehension.” Reading Research Quarterly. 29.2 (1994): 104-122. JSTOR. Web. 6 Oct 2014



Saturday, September 27, 2014

Once Upon A Time: A Contemporary Fairytale

Fairytales have always been one of my favorite types of stories.  Anything can happen in a fairytale—a frog could really be a prince, an apple, one of the healthiest fruits, could be poisonous, a grandma could be eaten by a wolf and live to tell the tale, and glass slippers could actually be comfortable to dance in.  Several months ago I came across a TV series on Netflix that takes the phrase “anything can happen” to a whole new level.   After the first episode of ABC’s Once Upon a Time it became clear this show was not going to depict fairytales how they were told to me as a child.  The creators of Once Upon A Time retold fairytales like no other storyteller has, and in so doing, has told one of the greatest contemporary tales. 

I once had a college professor tell my advanced creative writing class, “Every story has already been told.  All you have to do is write it better.”  Arguably, Once Upon a Time has reinvented some of the best contemporary fairytales.  Every story in Once Upon a Time has been told, Little Red Riding Hood, Snow White and the Seven Dwarves, Cinderella, Rumplestiltskin, and so on.  Twisting these stories, Once Upon a Time sheds new light on fairy tales, and keeps viewers guessing what will happen next. 
The main story woven throughout the episodes is Snow White and the Seven Dwarves.  Instead of the innocent princess we meet in Disney’s version of Snow White and the Seven Dwarves, Once Upon a Time introduces us to a new version of this classic character.   Snow White is portrayed like today’s Tiana from Disney’s The Princess and the Frog, or Rapunzel from Disney’s Tangled.  She isn’t the sweet, innocent girl we meet in most Snow White stories.  Once Upon a Time’s Snow White is pure and kind, but she’s also brave, fearless, and a bandit at one point in her life.  The Evil Queen, Regina from Snow White, is mean, ruthless, and literally tears people’s hearts out.  However, unlike the original telling of Snow White, she changes.  Regina vanquishes the Wicked Witch, saving Snow White’s baby; she also helps defeat Peter Pan, who is one of the most evil characters on the show.  Once Upon a Time modernizes the princess and makes the evil queen a rounded character. 
The fact that the show twists the stories, and at times leaves them unrecognizable from the version we knew is not unique.  The Broadway play Wicked portrays the Wicked Witch of the West as a good person who very few people understand.  Donna Jo Napoli takes fairytales and myths, and puts her own flavor into them. Napoli’s Beast, is a retelling of Beauty and the Beast. Likewise Breathe is a retelling of The Pied Piper. The 2012 movie Mirror, Mirror depicted the Snow White story, with Snow White turning into a bandit, learning swordsmanship, with a spirit to take her kingdom back.  The evil queen, in this version, is more developed than most stories of Snow White and the Seven Dwarves.
What makes Once Upon a Time a more interesting story than other retold fairytales, including Mirror, Mirror, is the fact that, as mentioned before, it melds different fairytales together.  For example, when Snow White is on the run from The Evil Queen, she bumps into Little Red Riding Hood.  Together, these two friends, along with Granny, “conquer” the wolf, who wreaks havoc on the village.  The Evil Queen meets Tinker Bell who tries to help her realize she can still have a happy ending.  In doing this Once Upon a Time puts a unique spice into the fairytales so viewers can’t predict which character will show up next, or who will fall in love with whom.  Rumplestiltskin is actually the beast Belle falls in love with, The Evil Queen is also Ursula, and who would have guessed The Evil Queen would fall in love with Robin Hood?     

The combined fact that Once Upon a Time twists and melds fairytales together is something that has rarely been done before, and has never had so much popularity.  This could possibly be a breakthrough in the way traditional fairytales are told.  Or this could be a onetime thing, which will never be replicated to this scale again.  I am excited to find out what Once Upon a Time throws at us in the upcoming Season 4 starting this Sunday.   

Friday, August 29, 2014

The Brothers: A Glimpse of the World Before

Have you ever read a book about an event you attended but have no recollection of, no pictures to prove you were there, no documents, and no living mortal can vouch for your attendance?  I recently completed such a book—Prologue: The Brothers, the first volume in The Great and Terrible series by Chris Stewart.
This book takes place in the premortal world and tells of the great battle fought between Satan and the children of God.  Stewart takes great literary license when describing the premortal world, because as he says, “The simple fact is that we know very little of what life was like for us in the premortal world . . . ” (Stewart xi).  In this world four siblings struggle to decide what side to take during the war in heaven.  Satan is cunning and deceiving, while the leaders of God’s army preach truth and light.  Each sibling faces trials that prepare him or her for their mission on earth.  The reader glimpses the mind of Satan and how evil he is.  They also glimpse the salvation of our Savior and how much faith we as his brothers and sisters put into His promise of coming to earth and leading a perfect life, suffering and then dying for us so we could return to live with God again. 
While reading about this battle of wits and words I couldn’t help but wonder where I was during this war.  Did I ever cross over to Satan’s side then come back as some characters did?  Or was I one of the valiant ones who always knew that Christ’s plan was the one in which we could truly gain salvation.  Was I ever a missionary or a leader who carried His word to those who were fence sitters?  Or was I a fence sitter myself?  Did I have friends who chose to follow Satan and are now working against me?  These and other questions pressed on my mind while reading.
No other book that I read has caused me to ponder where my place was during the time the book took place.  I can read a historical fiction book about 9/11 or the events of the ensuing war and remember where I was when these events took place.  I can look back on my journal and reflect on the feelings I had, my views on it, and my thoughts of the future.  But I have no earthly record of what happened to me during the time and setting of The Brothers.  This is why this book made me ponder as I did.
Because of this single fact I found this book extremely interesting.  Despite the fact it lacked a solid story line, or had wordy descriptions of the setting, The Brothers is a book worth reading.  The characters are believable.  The four siblings aren’t all the valiant type you would expect them to be.  Some have questions and some falter.  Because they aren’t perfect they are relatable. 

Above all I believe this story is worth reading because it makes you think.  Whether you believe we existed as spirits before we came here, or whether you even believe in a god, I would highly recommend this book.  It makes you think of your calling in life, what we are here to do, and our relationship to God and our fellow men. 

Monday, June 30, 2014

Fortune Cookie

Fortune Cookie
By: Josi S. Kilpack

A letter from San Francisco.  A burned body. An estranged sister.  And lot’s of secrets.  Mix them all together for two minutes and you have a recipe for a murder mystery you won’t want to miss! 

Summary
Sadie is busy putting the final touches to her wedding, which is only three weeks away, when she gets a letter in the mail from San Francisco.  The only person she knows there is her estranged sister, Wendy, who didn’t even come to their father’s funeral.  Sadie is hesitant about letting Wendy back into her life… until she realizes Wendy isn’t around to hurt her anymore.  Plus there’s a mystery that needs solving, and new food to be eaten.  Sadie soon uncovers twisted truths about her sister’s past, and meets people who definitely have a motive for murder. 

The Depth of a Relationship
I think more than anything Fortune Cookie explores the relationships. 
Ji and his family:  Ji does things out of duty and not so much because he loves what he does.  He works hard to honor his father-in-law and to provide a comfortable living for his daughters.  He married Lin Yang out of duty, never growing to love her.  Sadie helps Ji begin to see the reality of his miserable his life, and that it will continue to be miserable if he continues to do everything he does out of duty.
Ji and Sadie: Meeting a nephew you never knew you had.  That’s a surprise, especially when you find out your nephew lived a completely different life than you, and much of it because of the bad parenting of your sister (his mother).  Ji doesn’t have to accept Sadie into his life, and Sadie knows that.  In fact several times it appears as if Ji is pushing Sadie away.  This relationship hangs by a thread throughout the book, and Sadie must fight for it to stay together.
Pete and Sadie:  Revisiting San Francisco brings back a lot of hard memories for Pete.  It was a favorite vacation spot for him and his late wife, Pat.  Sadie and Pete not only have to work together to solve this mystery, but also to keep their relationship alive and well.  Pete must come to terms with Pat never coming back, and instead, having Sadie by his side for the rest of his life. 
I’ve said it before, and I’ll say it again, I love how these mystery books are more about relationships than they are about the mysteries.

A Personal Investment
There has been one other book in the Sadie Hoffmiller series where one of Sadie’s family members has been deeply involved in a case.  This caused Sadie to put everything she had into solving the mystery.  Fortune Cookie has the same personal investment involved.  This time the family member is the one who is dead, not the one being accused.  Because of this Sadie puts more of an effort into solving the mystery.

Personal Review
This book is one of the best books in the series, not because it’s a page turner, but because of what Sadie learns about herself and her relationships with those around her living and dead.  I love Sadie’s strength and love she has for others.  Before I thought Sadie was a little selfish in her relationship with Pete.  Fortune Cookie brought the unselfish side out in Sadie.